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Date: 28/11/17 - 09:52 pm Title: Midnight Memories

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Reviewer: Mrsdrfluke Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/08/14 - 09:30 pm Title: What Is and What Should Never Be

Fabbbbbbbbb. Loved this!!

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Date: 29/08/14 - 09:20 pm Title: Bohemian Rhapsody

Awww... That flashback + call ti Michael was like a stab to my heart. Why!? 

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Date: 29/08/14 - 09:14 pm Title: Florescent Adolescent

Wow ... Mae is so... Complex? I really love all the secrets you've already woven into the story! Like I can't wait to find everything out! Ahhh this is so good!! You're amazing 



Author's Response:

she is v complex, and just wait till you read on, she really developes and just keep that in mind, it's really amazing to see :)

Reviewer: AshtonsDimplesTho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/08/14 - 11:31 am Title: Golden

Oh my god I can't believe this is actually over! I've loved this story since I started reading it and I just want to tell you what a fabulous job you did writing it. The ending kf this was beautiful! You ended it perfectly! <3 so much love for this story! 

Reviewer: Mrsdrfluke Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/08/14 - 12:55 am Title: Midnight Memories

This is amazing. I can't wait to continue. But.... I need sleep! Promise I'll be back for more. 

Reviewer: AshtonsDimplesTho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/08/14 - 05:56 pm Title: Carmen

OMG OME MORE CHAPTER???? I'm gonna cry! I think she reacted properly! She's shocked and disappointed but she still loves him. 

Reviewer: kaayecw Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/08/14 - 09:15 pm Title: Carmen

You aren't thinking about doing a sequel? D:



Author's Response:

I know after this is over, the story of Ashton and Mae will be over. I will not be coming back to Ashtae bc I have a general idea of where their relationship will go, and it's not worth writing a fic over (tbh I just don't have any ideas)

But, I have thoughts of carrying on in the same verse. I got the idea to do a fic of Luke and Sadie. It would take place four years from now and be about them. But that's not definite. I'm having a lot of doubts about it.

I would honestly say to follow my tumblr to see if it's going to happen, or if you want to ask more, go over there.

But sadly, the story of Ash and Mae will not carry on :(

Reviewer: AshtonsDimplesTho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/14 - 09:29 am Title: A Team

OH MY GOD!! What...I did not see that coming!! Why would he OD??? Omg!! I'm gonna be so so sad when this story ends!! 



Author's Response:

Heh. Oops.

But I want you to think about it. Really look back at everything that happened in the past 10-15 chapters. It wad forshadowed A LOT.

I mean, the reason why he wore long sleeves in situations where they werejt nessasary, being super out of character at times, when he went sopping and said he had to go "pick something up". Beating up Matty.

It makes a lot of sense if you think about it

Reviewer: kaayecw Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/14 - 01:06 pm Title: Midnight Memories

sooooooooo started this story at midnight, and finished just now, wow, took me about 15 hours to read this whole thing, oups i'm a slow reader, but honestly don't regret taking my time to read this, awwwwwwwwww i want ashtae to finish on a good note but i honestly dont think it will and thats what sucks D: 

Author's Response:

OH MY GOSH U R THE GR8EST. HAVE ALL THE COOKIES

im a slow reader too. Reading all this would probably take me that long too. Longer if I had breaks.

I wont tell you much about the ending, because I dont spoil, but it's very bittersweet. I'm cutrently wrotong the last chapter and it's very sweet, but with that prominent sour taste in the back of your throat.

Just wait ;)

Reviewer: firewhiskey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/14 - 10:05 am Title: Heart Out

you are such an amazing writer! this is one of the best pieces of writing I've ever read- you have some serious talent omg. please keep updating, I can't wait to find out what happens with ash and Mae! your are so great- thanks for writing and posting this! the plot is so engrossing and you thought out everything so so so so well! I'm honestly stupefied how someone can jar this much talent. looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

You are the sweetest omg im gonna cry thank you so much. I'm glad it doesn't sick. I wad getting really iffy for a long while. 

Honestly, thank you so much. And I hope you like here ot goes because it is definitely not your typical ending to a story.

Its a very chloe-styled ending

Reviewer: luuuv5sos Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/14 - 11:53 pm Title: Heart Out

Ahhhh!!!! I have been waiting to hear Ashton's story!! You wrote it very well and I was enthralled with it!! Such a good story and I'm going to be so sad to see it end. So frickin sad! I love how deep this got and hope the other chapters are deep like this and filled with Mae and Ashton momens!! Love this story!! 💛💛💛💛



Author's Response:

oh yas I'm so glad you liked it! I really liked writing it. In a sadistic kind of way, I supposed. But it was so good to get his story out. I'm gonna be honest, my favorite part was when Ashton finished and Mae's just sitting on the ground and he says 'yeah, that was the look on her face' about his mom and Mae. Like, that just did it for me. And I'm really looking forward to what you're going to think of the next chapter.

But don't worry, this verse isn't really going anywhere for the time being. I plan to write Luke and Sadie's story after this. It'll be a lot shorter, but yes, you wont be completely left alone.

And don't worry about the deep shit, there will be plenty of that in the next few chapters. heheheheh.

Reviewer: AshtonsDimplesTho Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/14 - 08:40 pm Title: Heart Out

This chapter was amazingly written lemme say!! So so sad for poor Ash and all the crap he had!!! SHE LOVES HIM OMG!! Only 3 chapters left oh no!! I'm gonna be so sad when this is fiinished

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Date: 06/08/14 - 10:00 am Title: re: Stacks : Part 2

I really lie this chapter. I'm glad that Mikey and Mae assorted things out cause I love their friendship. Awwww I'm sad that it's nearly over cause its one if my favourite stories! 

Reviewer: AshtonsDimplesTho Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/07/14 - 06:27 pm Title: Dear Avery

Is Sadie pointing at Ashton??? Or is it someone else??? I really love the sadie/Mae friendship!! And I really hope Ash & Mae are just having a rough patch! Lol



Author's Response:

You'll find out in the next chapter who Sadie had a thing with. I mean, it's been slightly for shadowed who she was seeing but you have to be like fucking Sherlock to figure it out. 

 

But im glad im not the only one who likes their friendship!

Reviewer: AshtonsDimplesTho Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/14 - 07:55 am Title: Clarity

UPDATE ASAP please!! Lol

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Date: 29/06/14 - 10:50 pm Title: Skinny Love

I have read a lot of stories on this site, and I have to say this is one of my favorites! You develope the characters so well and I feel like I actually know them. This is definitely one of my favorite chapters so far and I can't wait for the next one!!  Maybe we could get to know a little more about Ashton?? But I have a feeling that's coming up soon:) keep up the wonderful writing!!



Author's Response:

You are so sweet! Thank you so much! 

And don't worry, I have this second half to be more about ashton. But we just have to get over this big bump that is the middle of the story. Which we are almost to the peak of the shit hitting the fan. But within a few chapters, when things calm down, we'll get to know ashton even more ;)

- C

Reviewer: agnessinees Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/06/14 - 10:52 am Title: You & I

Is Matty ever going to comeback??!!??



Author's Response:

Yes! He's been written. I have that planned. Matty will be coming back as said, but it's still gonna be a few more chapters.

Bur S00N. I promise!

Reviewer: michaelbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/06/14 - 05:01 pm Title: Fire Escape

This fanfic is brilliant. Just wow. Well done! (:

Reviewer: hillaryous Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/14 - 07:32 pm Title: Fire Escape

+I'm also wondering: has Michael's opinion on Ashton being with Mae changed> because it seems, as of right now, that he doesn't care anymore.



Author's Response:

It's good that you're not forgetting about Michael.  Brownie points for you. 

For the most part, I've had an issue trying to have Michael fit in with recent chapters,  since I've been focusing on Mae and Harry's friendship more,  but it's also been pointed out many times how their friendship is. I don't want to say too much since Michael plays a huge party coming up,  but I will say this:

Michael is exhausted. It's stated bluntly in the story multiple times. You know when you have friends you love, and you'd kill for (or close to it), but they are such a handful? Okay, so if you don't, I do. And you write what you know.  Their friendship is slightly modeled after the one I have with a very good friend. It's just tiring, and now Ashton's offering to help lift that weight from his shoulders and is not that he doesn't care, he just doesn't want to be hey baby sitter anymore. 

Like I said, you'll come to understand more soon. He comes off as an uncaring asshole friend, but if you look into it,  and with what happened with Calum, you can see is alot more than that. 

- Chloe

Reviewer: hillaryous Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/06/14 - 05:50 pm Title: Fire Escape

wow this story is progressing really quickly but i enjoy it. it's such a sliceoflife kind of story and it's reall different. i love how you can really see how ashton and mae develop into different types of people. even harry is changing (for the better or worse i can't really say). wow this is such a great story. you're a fantastic writer.



Author's Response:

Ugh thank you! You are to sweet!

And I'm glad you can see character growth in those two (even harry, whom I think is growing in to man finally. As you said, if that's good or not I'm not sure either. That's probably for you to decide later on.) But these two have progressed dramatically. Tbh, I never intended for Mae to deep this deep in her depression, but it just makes sense with all this shot that's being thrown at her. 

And one of my biggest issues that I see in fics is when things get so sad and depressing that it seems highly unrealistic. And I'm understanding from you that this is not the case. I've been thinking it's getting a bit out of hand but hey, if you like it, great! 

- C

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Date: 01/06/14 - 02:48 pm Title: Medicine

Oh, also I was wondering about Harry. Is he like a black and white person? Cause if was Thinking about his eye description and how he reacts about louis. Like he can't handle the emotion and is just confused and his opinion on Matty, but I'm not sure cause if someone broke my friends heart I'd be pretty pissed off at them too. But mostly it's his Confusion on his love for louis, someone who never seems I care for him that made me wonder of he struggles to not compartmentalize things as right or wrong, good or bad. 



Author's Response:

It's funny that you should bring this up, and what you're writing is rather interesting. And I never quite put thought to that.

But I'll tell you this : Harry's character wasn't supposed to be what he is now. He wasn't supposed to be so huge and important. In the beginning, I only meant for him and Louis to basically be an analogy for Ash and Mae's future relationship. Their struggles actually being rather the same. And it may be in Medicine, or maybe DIWK prt. 3, that it states that he gets rather upset when Louis sleeps with people. It's completely hypocritical, speaking that Harry is just running around fucking like a rabbit. He was the character to have become important out of the blue while writing, and since then he's been slowly blossoming, and I've been coming up with more of a story for him (I can't help it, even if it's never mentioned). And I think Harry is just the most childish of all the characters. Not so immature as in annoying and perverted, and etc, but in the means of being naive and incompotent about the world around him. He's very confused, yes, and I don't know how Larry will end up by the end of the story, but that side plot is definitely one that should not be dismissed. Harry has always been Mae's counterpart, and it's supposed to be one giant metaphore for Ash and Mae's relationship that you might not even understand by the end. But if you do, I'll bake you a cake.

- C 

Reviewer: Spott Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/06/14 - 02:45 pm Title: Medicine

Ahh!! Two chapters. That made my day <3. Even if you are hitting writers block, the story honestly doesn't show it. Btw the analogy with the hollow chocolate bunny, idk but it just was really descriptive to me. And I'm sooo glad They're friends. But it's weird how Mae knows she loves (or at least intensely like) ashton but also knows that by refusing to accept those feelings, she can continue to keep her emotions relatively shut off. And the sex not working thing was genius. That I think is what really made the situation clear to both ash and Mae. And I'm proud of Mae for calling ash to talk. And trying to think through her response. And I also think you should tell us what Mae has done for ash because honestly I didn't really think about it much. Partially because ash is working so hard on fixing her. Also I'm super excited your starting another story because I really like you as an author. A lot <3



Author's Response:

I am so glad you're leaving reviews, I love reading them and answering them <3

And I was very unsure about the analogy, so thank you very much for saying you liked it! Good to know someone thought it was good and not dumb. Also, I can see where your confusion might be with Mae's feelings. It's mainly trying her mind forcing itself not to like Ashton in the way other than friends. If you've ever wanted so badly not to have a crush or something, and have forced yourself to stop (I have myself), then think of it that way. The moment she gives into those feelings, the battle is already lost. Like once she's in it, she knows she wont be able to get out..

As for me showing how Mae has helpped Ash, I really want to show you! But I don't want to give away what is probably the biggest secret in this whole story. I have it planned out on how we all find out, but it's near the end, and I'm afraid you wont know it all till then. I'll hint at it (I'm huge into foreshadowing), and there will be points where you're given reasons that are a bit out of context, that make sense towards the end. Just hang in there bub and you'll see! ;)

And you're sweet, thank you. I have one for 1dff that's definitely coming out after this. But on my author's page, the one I have listed will probably be removed and replaced with a different one, which I actually have more ideas together for. I had just gotten more ideas today. But you can always ask me! You can pm me on my proboards thing, or hop onto my tumblr or whatever. (this got long wow sorry. rambling!)

- Chloe <3

Reviewer: knknknkn Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/05/14 - 08:17 pm Title: R U Mine? : Part 2

this story is so good and it makes me like really stressed but in a really good way like a I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER way and this chapter has sent me over the edge like i thought it was all gonna come to a head with ash and mae but now mae knows about sadie and OH MY GOD but seriously this story is just so damn good i love it thank you for writing something so good 



Author's Response:

Thank you for loving it darling! 

We should all form a prayer circle for Ash and Mae to get together. 

But if you're feeling super stressed, then you should take some xanax before reading the next one. It is quite the ride my friend. 

-- C

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